Semester 1 Essay Reflection

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Regarding both essays, I struggled to obtain any expanded core points.  This is because I was not able to achieve all 7 points in the basic scoring guide.  In the compare and contrast essays, I repeatedly made errors with the analysis between the two points I was comparing.  Evidence was no problem, and thesis statements yielded me points.  I need more practice with change over time essays before I can make concrete statements, but with the information I have, I can begin focusing on areas on which I need improvement.  I made a stupid error with evidence on my midterm change over time essay by not specifying exactly what I was talking about.  That will receive some of my attention, but looking upon it now, I can see what I did incorrectly.  But once again, the analysis proves to be a weak point in my essays.  Global context may need some attention as well.